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My first attempt of creating an icon outside of Dream Maker. Tell me your opinions and critism.
ID:194703
Sep 11 2011, 12:35 am
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It's hard to tell what it's supposed to be. I know it's some sort of robot, but it took me a while to figure out where everything was. The arms are too long and the head is too small. At first glance, especially at the top, it just looks like a bunch of jumbled pixels, but when I looked at it a bit longer, I'm like "Oh, that's a head." Work on making your art more distinguishable rather than just a dull figure.
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its good for a starter, this should be a character in Gundam right?
things to be fixed are: . Shading (make it a little be darker) . Arms. . Stance. . Head should be bigger. good luck |
In response to Sers000
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Actually. I'm pretty sure this is Gallantmon from Digimon Season 3/various Digimon games. It's pretty nice, but as others have noted it's too hard to tell who it is and some of the sizing is off.
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In response to ImmeasurableHate
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Hah, I didn't even notice that. Good catch. Maybe the last post time needs to be easier to notice, or, ya know... People could stop the extremely late and unnecessary replies <.<
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The stance is quite odd, as for the shading it's quite messy, but nevertheless it looks nice.