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might make it smaller... seems a bit big to me.
Nah the size is fine, the inconsistant light source on the other hand is... irksome. But can easily be fixed if you cast more shadow under his chin and make the shadow on his cheek sharper to define it's shape more, same goes for the nose.

One of the tricks to see if you've shaded everything correctly is when you squint your eyes and you can still distuingish between the facial features and the feel correct...
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i think the shading in the first one better fits a anime style feel to the piece...

2nd one feels a bit to much o_O i like the more simple look better.
Second one is a definite improvement though... the eye-brows are a bit much though and don't quite match with the passive look on his face.
I like the second one better. It shows the lightsource a lot better.

Anyways, Kai, we should work on something. <3
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Jordan11 wrote:
I like the second one better. It shows the lightsource a lot better.

Anyways, Kai, we should work on something. <3

i added you on msn seems either we miss eachother or i typed in the wrong one... gonna have to talk about what we'll work on ;)

the eye brows was a bit much i fixed them in my new edit and made a east and west state
I sorta denied the request by mistake and tried adding you again but it didnt work lol. Tell Kash to invite us to one combo so we can add each other.
ugly.
^Hater jajajajaja
i can't believe how terrible i was back then.

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