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The concept of this char is that it is a world eater. In Galaxia it will attack by shooting out boulders, so eventually I will try to animate the mouth to rotate kinda like a saw blade also the thing on it's head is suppose to be like a mountain as the world eater in theory is living world that can move about. The mountains are suppose to look like a crown.

Things I know are messed up with it:

-Lines are horrible
-shading is messed up

Anything else is up for grabs
Wtf is this?
I edited it to explain.
Where the fuck is the mouth?
I think we're looking straight down its throat.

I have no idea what perspective this thing is supposed to be in for starters.

You've backslid. You were making progress in your last thread, but this is a major step backwards:

Refer back to the advice we gave you last time: here
Its doom style perspective. so First personish.

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I haven't gotten to shading yet, but I need help getting his cape to look more like a cape. This is just a rough sketch/idea as I work out the details. I'll clean up everything more later on.
God can't help you now.
If I had the answer I wouldn't ask.
Hopefully one day it will all just click and make sense.
I am hoping. Things seem to be starting to do that. I have started to read some things, or look at some things and my mind's like "Oh yeah.."