You be the judge..

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Jun 18 2002, 8:23 pm
This is my sorry attempt at making a mob icon.. What do you think of it? I need feed-back :)



-Rcet
Jun 18 2002, 9:35 pm
i see a very original and very very good icon idea coming up...
Jun 18 2002, 9:36 pm
thats prety ......ummmm good id say
Jun 18 2002, 10:06 pm
In response to Cellikon
pretty good, but for what kind of game is he gonna be used, the dude looks a bit stressed and has huge upper arms....you're not gonna make a nother db game are you?
Jun 18 2002, 11:08 pm
You seem to have a sign of skill there. My suggestions are that you try more shadowing on the outside with darker color, and keep working with your icons. You can always get better I know I have in the past year that Ive been with BYOND.

--Neo--

P.S: Try looking at a pic of a person or anime when doing it, I know its hard to get too detailed in 32 x 32, but you'll find it helps.
Jun 19 2002, 11:15 am (Edited on Jun 19 2002, 4:28 pm)
Rcet wrote:


Maybe lower the eyes a pixel..detail the pants..connect the arms to the body so they don't really look like they can fall off...umm use 3 colors instead of 2 or it might just be cause its in jpg...umm...might want to make the hands by his side too unless your going for that 24/7 stance look...otherwise it looks good and if you need help feel free to contact me on AIM: oFuZzYoDiCEo

[edit]:i just noticed his head is sunk in his shoulders like hes shrugging or hunching move it up a pixel...