im NEW: this is NEW : house for my game.

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Apr 19 2009, 9:30 am
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8117/housetest.png

dunno how to add it without a link.

tell me what you think.

i havent done any shading.

its made in paint
Apr 19 2009, 3:42 pm
If i were you i would re-do the shading of the windows,
and make it more "complex".

Example:




I made it actually fast, sorry for that.


And about the walls and the rest of the building ..
i would add it some dithering and more colors.

you can go to the front of the guild website,
go to tutorials sections, and go to the Dithering part.

Apr 19 2009, 4:20 pm
Zeppo wrote:


dunno how to add it without a link.

tell me what you think.

i havent done any shading.

its made in paint

The stairway looks more like a upside-down attic stairway. Try starting from the top(Small-Big) instead of (Big to small).

Wish I could of showed you some examples but I'm in a rush.
Apr 20 2009, 9:38 am
In response to Danny Kenobi
i've made some adjustments to it, stairs are turned upside down, now going from little to bigger.

redone the windows and added some simple lines on the house.

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/8117/housetest.png

Apr 20 2009, 8:11 pm
In response to Zeppo
I don't think the bottom edge needs to be bright like the left and right edges. It makes it look a little weird.
Apr 21 2009, 12:59 am
In response to BlackKingX
I've done some more changes to it:
Tell me what you think about it, what i can do better etc..

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/8117/housetest.png


Apr 21 2009, 7:20 am (Edited on Apr 29 2009, 3:10 am)
In response to Zeppo
Zeppo wrote:
I've done some more changes to it:
Tell me what you think about it, what i can do better etc..

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/8117/housetest.png



This newest version you've made is pillow-shaded. Unlike your old version and Dannys version it has the lightest color surrounded by all these other colors. If you want your mirror looking more like Dannys, don't use so many colors and don't make so many shines (2-3), with 1 of those shines being 2 pixels thick.
Apr 21 2009, 9:24 am
In response to Hulio-G
Hulio-G wrote:
Zeppo wrote:
I've done some more changes to it:
Tell me what you think about it, what i can do better etc..

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/8117/housetest.png



This newest version you've made is . Unlike your old version and Dannys version it has the lightest color surrounded by all these other colors. If you want your mirror looking more like Dannys, don't use so many colors and don't make so many shines (2-3), with 1 of those shines being 2 pixels thick.

pillow-shaded. Yes, basically like hulio said, you might want to fix up your shading and your windows. I can't believe I didn't see the pillow shading, I just figured it was bad shading.
Apr 22 2009, 8:50 am
In response to Zeppo
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6871/lolrby.png


i made a quick edit to your building ..
nothing too big ..

i messed around with the windows and the stairs,
if i was you i would keep working on the door and
the building in general.

i would re-do the walls ..
and dither it around so it
looks like actually wood.


Dithering Tutorial

Also, you can look up for more on Tutorial Section


and take the stair as an example, (i rushed with it)
Apr 22 2009, 8:55 am
In response to Danny Kenobi
Danny Kenobi wrote:
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6871/lolrby.png


i made a quick edit to your building ..
nothing too big ..

i messed around with the windows and the stairs,
if i was you i would keep working on the door and
the building in general.

i would re-do the walls ..
and dither it around so it
looks like actually wood.


Dithering Tutorial

Also, you can look up for more on Tutorial Section

You dont have to dither.