I am new/bad at pixeling.a friend asked me to help him with some turfs for his bleach game.
It is supposed to be a rokungai house, but i don't know there is something in it that i don't like. Do you guys got any tip/critic to help to this sprite/icon/work better?
Good start.
Avoid pure black in the final product. Instead of using black as a shadow for the tiled overhang, use a darker brown or something that will make it look like there's really a shadow over it instead of a big pure black block. Even if the light is coming from the top, unless it was an extreme, focused light, the shadow wouldn't be pitch black.
Try adding some texture to the bottom wall like you did with the top. Also with the wood panel on the bottom (Sparingly. There's not TOO much room to do much there so don't try to fit too much in). There's some white edges on the top wall I don't really get. And finally, your tiles are a little pillow shaded. Define where your light source is and work with that in mind.