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This is my Fishbone D icon I made about 3-4 months ago, I know it need some editing but I'm show you the original before I start. I think I need to fix the arms.
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C&C is needed.
It seems very flat, and the pillow shading doesn't look very good at all. You might want to rework your colors, and have a higher contrast between light, base, and dark colors. They seem very dull, and don't look too good. Actually looking a picture of Fishbone he should be a deep blue-green. His arms should be skinnier, leaner, and he should have huge fists. His torso should be skinnier as well, and his head should be lower more so you can see his protruding back.

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/9/99/ Hollow2.jpg/180px-Hollow2.jpg
In response to Maggeh
Here is the updated version that I did. I just change the colors I was using I didn't fix shading. I just want to know if I'm going the right way with this.
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In response to Lord Ulquiorra
Lord Ulquiorra wrote:
Here is the updated version that I did. I just change the colors I was using I didn't fix shading. I just want to know if I'm going the right way with this.
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Later on I'm gonna make the arms alittle skinner again and make fist smaller and make it look like it's making a fist. Make it look like this but facing south if that makes sense to you.
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http://www.posemaniacs.com/tools/handviewer/ -016
http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=221
http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=225
http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html

These are for both of you. I'd also suggest the other 8 chapters of Derek yu.