Well, I'm pretty bored so I started making a portrait of my favorite character from S.Cry.Ed. I have the outline done and I would like some comments on how I can improve it.
Here's my reference:
http://animeclick.lycos.it/prove/serie/Scryed/Scryed12.jpg
And here's my portrait:
Thanks for reading!
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Jul 29 2008, 9:13 pm
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Jul 29 2008, 9:59 pm
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Pretty good so far, though the eye (left) and jaw looks a bit weird
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In response to Cowqueefer
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I hope you know how to anti-alias because if you plan to color that alot of those lines will appear jagged unless they're smoothened out. http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=228
Take a look at chapter 2 as well, even if you had been already doing this now that you know it's something you're supposed to do you'll stay more consistent. http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=221 |
In response to Hulio-G
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Hulio-G wrote:
I hope you know how to anti-alias because if you plan to color that alot of those lines will appear jagged unless they're smoothened out. http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=228 Yeah, I've seen those before. And they are quite helpful. Thanks for reminding me though. I'll go over it and smooth out the lines. But not right now. I'm pretty tired. But anyways, I did make a quick edit of the portrait. |
In response to Kazuma Torisuna
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Fix his left eye while you're at it, he's got some serious crazy-eye going on(shift it more to the right)
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In response to Disturbed Puppy
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Disturbed Puppy wrote:
Fix his left eye while you're at it, he's got some serious crazy-eye going on(shift it more to the right) Crazy Eyes O.o |
In response to Cowqueefer
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Cowqueefer wrote:
Disturbed Puppy wrote: I lul'd. And yeah, agreed. His eyes look kinda funny. It might be because he is tilted down, but his eyes look crooked? o.o |
In response to KashikoiMeisai
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The left eye isn't over far enough. If he moves it a bit to the right, it should be fine.
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