ID:258189
 
Pretty good so far, though the eye (left) and jaw looks a bit weird


In response to Cowqueefer
I hope you know how to anti-alias because if you plan to color that alot of those lines will appear jagged unless they're smoothened out. http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=228

Take a look at chapter 2 as well, even if you had been already doing this now that you know it's something you're supposed to do you'll stay more consistent. http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=221
In response to Hulio-G
Hulio-G wrote:
I hope you know how to anti-alias because if you plan to color that alot of those lines will appear jagged unless they're smoothened out. http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=228

Take a look at chapter 2 as well, even if you had been already doing this now that you know it's something you're supposed to do you'll stay more consistent. http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=221

Yeah, I've seen those before. And they are quite helpful. Thanks for reminding me though. I'll go over it and smooth out the lines. But not right now. I'm pretty tired. But anyways, I did make a quick edit of the portrait.

Photobucket
In response to Kazuma Torisuna
Fix his left eye while you're at it, he's got some serious crazy-eye going on(shift it more to the right)
In response to Disturbed Puppy
Disturbed Puppy wrote:
Fix his left eye while you're at it, he's got some serious crazy-eye going on(shift it more to the right)


Crazy Eyes O.o
In response to Cowqueefer
Cowqueefer wrote:
Disturbed Puppy wrote:
Fix his left eye while you're at it, he's got some serious crazy-eye going on(shift it more to the right)


Crazy Eyes O.o

I lul'd.
And yeah, agreed. His eyes look kinda funny. It might be because he is tilted down, but his eyes look crooked? o.o
In response to KashikoiMeisai
The left eye isn't over far enough. If he moves it a bit to the right, it should be fine.