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Well this is not the Katon, Housenka no Jutsu's fire balls, but what happens after you get hit by them.
I studied all day till about 12:00 am on fire and fire tuts. And watched videos of real fire and anime fire.
It is now 4:03 am and i just finished this, but it still looks kinda weird to me. So i am looking for some C&C about it to see what you think.

NOTE!
Everything you see was built in 32x32 windows of BYOND. This piece took me 4 hours and is the first draft.
This fire belongs to Naruto: Gaiden.(I did not take the name because of ninja gaiden, but for its meaning.)
Also feel free to edit the fire to show what your C&C is about.

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This is my first time making turfs. So yeah tell me how i did.(Turfs where also done in 32x32 windows so everything here i showed you is in byond and ready to use.)Also the water here is most likley going to be for "Giant Water Vortex."( Went for the cartoony look)

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The fire is really 4 frames, but the fourth frame is just the second recycled so it looks like it is kinda flowing.
Theres alerady a Naruto: Gaiden on BYOND ^^, there is actually several.
In response to Bakasensei
Bakasensei wrote:
Theres alerady a Naruto: Gaiden on BYOND ^^, there is actually several.

Oh well thats why you don't make a hub right away.
So nobody's gonna C&C it? Come on there was lots on my base, heck i'll even post my base if you want to C&C.
I think thats dirt.... you can see a giant line where the grid is... you might want to fix that.

I don't really C&C naruto art. I'm not into it.
In response to Akto
Yea, the giant line in the dirt is definitely a problem. Fire look good, but for the turfs: Contrast and better ramps. They lack depth and the color choices are kinda boring.