tips/comments are helpful
ignore the detail on the head for know
yup thats it, thanks
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 Oct 27 2008, 1:31 pm
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Just some Lineart im working on
tips/comments are helpful ignore the detail on the head for know yup thats it, thanks | |
W1ldr3x wrote:
Looking pretty good. ooh, yeah forgot about that xD i was gonna leave that since i always have trouble making it look natural | |
It matters what perspective, I actually can't tell, though if you added a tail it would look like 3/4ths, though if you kept it like that it almost looks side scroller like. Which would be cool cause the way I see it is a dragon flying up, then flipping(Thats what yours is at) then flying down on him! Though if you want a 3/4 perspective, you could move the head up a bit so you could see his nose/mouth, the way it looks now is that is head is facing down towards the ground instead of in front of him.
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i say give it some more kneck, and a long tail and your set ^.^
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Hulio-G wrote:
yeah, i fixed that up:  also did some shading etc... tell me what you think/how i could improve (its not fully done yet) also cheers to wildrex for help with the tail | |
Atomcat wrote:
yeah, i fixed that up: The whole point of that was to so show you the dragons head isn't at the right angle for that perspective. You don't think it's weird he's flying with his head down? | |
he's flying now!?
o.O it might just be me, but i see him as just standing there I think i must've failed miserably =.= i seriously went through all this thinking it looked like it was standing | |
Atomcat wrote:
he's flying now!? In that case I'm in bakasensais position having trouble interupting exactly what kind of perspective is going on...My reply was most influenced by his. Maybe you should have corrected him. I also looked at it and saw a creature flying Well you made it, I guess it's standing then. In this case the entire game is top down and not 3/4ths. Meaning unless this dragon is some sort of giraffe it should be "much" longer. And of course you know if this is going into a game the players(top of the heads) and houses(roofs only) will also have to be directly top-down. I could make another side view of how to interpret this dragon when I think of it as "standing" if you want, Heh. | |
Hulio-G wrote:
Atomcat wrote: yeah i understand that all the other sprites/icons in the game must match hmm i guess i will have to make the neck longer, you can do the perspective thing if you want, it would help *PS* dont break the quote train | |
Atomcat wrote:
yeah i understand that all the other sprites/icons in the game must match Lol...Thats probably the last area to worry about. Try focusing on the actual back (not necessarily the tail). Make it clear he's being looked down upon from top and that he's "standing on all fours" not sitting down like he's waiting for doggy treats. http://images.google.com/ images?hl=en&q=dragon&um=1&ie=UTF-8&sa=N&tab=wi *PS* dont break the quote train Any reason for this? Lengthy posts can get horribly messy, waste bandwidth and occasionally cause the page to load slower (lag). I'm usually the one guy thats that requests for the opposite! | |
Irks me a little about how you cant see the tail in the background though.
That's about it.