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Mar 30 2009, 11:41 pm (Edited on Mar 30 2009, 11:50 pm)
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Okay, I decided that if I need help on something One Piece related to post them all here that way I don't spam the guild.
First thing! This weird piece of meat on a bone. Reference: http://img60.onemanga.com/mangas/00000002/00000000/13.jpg (The piece of meat he is chomping down on!)  I think it doesn't look as good as the reference. Second thing! The bread...  (Seems to plain to me.) C&C is a ++! >.< | |
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Mar 31 2009, 9:33 am
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Jamora1124
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The bread is alright, but, the meat needs to be shaped better. It would suggest making it rounder.
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