Apart from several grammar and punctuation errors, it's not a bad review at all! If you clean it up, I can certainly pass it around to other venues and potential players! :)
Would be nice if it could be played on a Widescreen Laptop (Mine's on the MAX Resolution and it still dosent fit.)
Other than that it looks great.
Minimum requirement is 1024x768 resolution. If you have that, it should fit fine.