Onto your image:
It looks really choppy and hard to make out to me. If I didn't have the reference I honestly wouldn't know what I was looking at. Maybe get it some sort of an outline, I guess that's what threw me off. Either way, great job!
Sooo You Happy Yet -.-
That's how you shoulda made it try not to just make the pixel really quick and make it small that'll be hard. Make it like ACTUAL size or somthing but make it smaller(Also i kno i did some things wrong i didn't care i made this in less than an hour -.-)
You definitely just outlined that bleach reference, VixiV