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 Jun 14 2012, 12:17 pm
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So I started this last night and with a few help of some people I got where I am now on it. Anyways, if you guys think you see anything that I did not(other then the pillowed bangs which i did purposely) and the hair is a bit over-done. Just post and let me know. C+C, no arguments etc. Post away.
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#1 Jun 14 2012, 12:40 pm
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ImmeasurableHate
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How do you get that glossy look?
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#2 Jun 14 2012, 3:03 pm
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By using an array of colors correctly and placing them correctly. It's color choice, vibrant colors, not dull colors.
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#3 Jun 14 2012, 5:24 pm
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The hair looks artificial. It doesn't look like hair but like thick plastic wig on top of her head. Also, her right tit could use some tweaking around the nipple.
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#4 Jun 14 2012, 5:45 pm
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I agree with EmpirezTeam
Her right boob looks bigger than her left and her bangs look like plastic tubes unless that was what you meant by "pillow bangs" | |
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#5 Jun 14 2012, 6:40 pm
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Alright guys, another update. I fixed some proportional issues and fixed the hair a bit and changed a few colors on my pallet.
Here's the new one:  And here's the old one(for comparison):  | |
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#7 Jun 14 2012, 8:33 pm (Edited on Jun 14 2012, 8:43 pm)
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Newest version, I tried to get rid of the pillowed hair and Changed the colors a tad-bit, I think I might add a pink color back in there. I also fixed some more anatomy issues
But for now:  | |
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#9 Jun 14 2012, 9:44 pm
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Boxcar seems to of improved the hair a bit, but the bangs look like leaves in his. The bangs seem to be the most noticable issue, but I think the lighting on the face, particularly near the left eye is a bit odd. Also the right eye looks smaller than the left if you really look at it. Too small in my opinion, but that could be an angle issue.
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#10 Jun 14 2012, 11:03 pm
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For the bangs/hair I think this is the problem~~
 I hope this makes sense @__@ or i could just be wrong... | |
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#11 Jun 14 2012, 11:14 pm
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GTD has the right idea, restyle the hair to be consistent as he/she outlined.
The eye is off a little. The bottom of the eye should roughly be at the tip of the ear in height, if the head is angled straight up vertically. | |
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#12 Jun 14 2012, 11:19 pm
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I agree with GTD, but it's also worth noting that I love the thin/sharp strands version. Both consistent versions would work, and round may suit the style you're aiming for more; not sure. Thin/sharp, however, looks frickin awesome and very anime-like yet realistic.
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#13 Jun 14 2012, 11:42 pm
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Alright guys, I made A LOT of changes, more intensity in the skin(contrast) and the most obvious is the hair. I re-did it and also gave it a color change and now it looks better. Nice pictures too Gtd, but when you posted it, I was in the process of fixing the hair, so I guess it helped a bit. I also fixed the eye too. Anyways bedtime.
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#14 Jun 14 2012, 11:44 pm
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Looks better, only, the eyebrow isn't natural. It looks more like a brush than hair, lower it a bit and give it some body.
I like the hair. =] | |
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#16 Jun 15 2012, 12:00 am
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Awesome! The hair looks a lot better! Oh and you changed the hair color.. are you keeping it this color or are you planning to change it back to purple?
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#17 Jun 15 2012, 12:53 am
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Eyebrow is definitely better, but it's a little too dark, and sharp. Try to anti alias it so it appears to somewhat fade into the face (just a little, you don't want it to look like a smear)
Maybe make it a little thinner, too, but that's just what I think looks good for a female, it's possible for an eyebrow to be that thick. Good work! | |
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#18 Jun 15 2012, 9:43 am
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Thanks, and yeah I'm keeping the hair this color, but I'm going to change the eye color though l0l.
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