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Here's the recent base I've been working on, I think I've improved from all the other bases , I've made shading and shape wise.



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a really fast edit

i fix the legs cause yours look discombobulate and arms

i also made the chest pop up more added some more details.
In response to John liriano
Nice.
In response to John liriano
John liriano wrote:
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a really fast edit

i fix the legs cause yours look discombobulate and arms

i also made the chest pop up more added some more details.

Heh, thanks John your edits good as usual, any more critique people?
In response to Rasengan3oo4
Hmmm, there is a big perspective issue here. Your using 3/4ths right? If so, the feet are the only thing that are in 3/4ths, the rest of it is in a side scroller view(Which makes him look like he is on his tippy toes). Look in Tutorials for the 3/4ths perspective topic AmonR made.
In response to Dark Inc.
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.
In response to Riku 123q
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

So? and ur telling me that?
Plox do me a favor dun talk to me and go check ur uber nub ranking http://www.byond.com/members/ChrisGayle Honorary Noob List!
In response to Dark Inc.
Dark Inc. wrote:
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

So? and ur telling me that?
Plox do me a favor dun talk to me and go check ur uber nub ranking http://www.byond.com/members/ChrisGayle Honorary Noob List!

You think I care what chrisgayle or anyone on the internet thinks of me?
Anyway that was directed to Ras I accidentally quoted you.
Now do me a favor and learn to spell at least partially right.
KTHXBAI!
In response to Riku 123q
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

So? and ur telling me that?
Plox do me a favor dun talk to me and go check ur uber nub ranking http://www.byond.com/members/ChrisGayle Honorary Noob List!

You think I care what chrisgayle or anyone on the internet thinks of me?
Anyway that was directed to Ras I accidentally quoted you.
Now do me a favor and learn to spell at least partially right.
KTHXBAI!

Take these arguments off of these forums.
In response to Riku 123q
Riku 123q wrote:
Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

Its 32x32 icon sizes what do you expect. If I changed the legs I would have to change the whole icon itself also.
It looks good.

:)
In response to Rugg
Rugg wrote:
It looks good.

:)
Thanks I'm going to post updated version a bit later which might feature new color choice, I got critique Pmitch over msn. :O