My song titled "I Miss You" for a girl I had a "relationship" with :/
It wasn't really a relationship but we were dating.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFAquZ9f0Zc
Be honest/blunt.
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Dec 31 2013, 8:13 pm
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Jan 1 2014, 5:47 am
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This would sound better on the piano. LEARN PIANO
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too repetitive in my opinion.
guessing this isn't the full song, since the ending didn't really sound like an "end" to the song |
^ correct, I state that its all I have in the video :) just an idea i can come back to later
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haha i cant right now, not near a piano, here is another song I've done: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C0kZ40v_FZc
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you need to talk about sexing girls spitting in their faces and leaving them heart broken... that type of music seems to be popular now days.
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I really like your chord choices. You could make it less repetitive by switching the order around, or by coming up with some (or all) new chords. Then just sing full emo and it will be a hit!
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In response to Southend_boi
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Southend_boi wrote:
you need to talk about sexing girls spitting in their faces and leaving them heart broken... that type of music seems to be popular now days. you forgot sosa. girls love it when you talk about sosa. |
I'm considering having that for a good portion for the song and maybe have a melody come in with a counterpoint melody and it will distract people from the main rhythm of the song, like I did in my "Sad Sad Song" song
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yall aint ready for branks yall might have to start at level 0 and contact Lil B or somethin and work your way up
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