a title i'm playing with
it's p cool, but the M kind of bugs me because it's really wobbly and the eyes look a little like wings.
here's an idea:
1. try making the wobbly font look more scratchy
2. try making the font white. then make a layer underneath the font + eyes that is a big black blob which serves as a background to the white text. apply a gaussian blur to the black blob so that it looks like a big shadow, and then change the one big pair of eyes to numerous little eyes lurking around the text in the shadows.
i do like the positioning of the text, though, so that's a keeper
Maybe drop the "the"?
"Things that go bump in the night"
It's nice... I would drop the white eyes cause you have the letters in the center of attention.I would put little red eyes within some of the letters but make it visible so that you know it's eye's. The M is good you should make the rest of the letters in the word "Bump" just like the "M" so it looks like it's personifying the word.
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