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ID:258612 Oct 12 2009, 7:41 am
Ashton09	please leave a remark and tell me if you think it still needs a little more touch ups.

Oct 12 2009, 8:01 am
The Saikyou Alliance	Ashton09 wrote: please leave a remark and tell me if you think it still needs a little more touch ups. I honestly didn't think it was finshed you bearly shaded it id suggest useing more than 1 line of shading.

Oct 12 2009, 11:55 am In response to The Saikyou Alliance
Reeex	The Saikyou Alliance wrote: I honestly didn't think it was finshed you bearly shaded it id suggest useing more than 1 line of shading. This was a really useless comment, next time try to be more constructive, like saying the blades could use more highlights, or even add a edit.

Oct 13 2009, 8:57 am In response to Reeex
The Saikyou Alliance	Reeex wrote: The Saikyou Alliance wrote: I honestly didn't think it was finshed you bearly shaded it id suggest useing more than 1 line of shading. This was a really useless comment, next time try to be more constructive, like saying the blades could use more highlights, or even add a edit. How was it useless i was just implying he needed to shade more

Oct 13 2009, 11:28 am In response to The Saikyou Alliance
AmonR	Let's not critique other people's critiques. :]

Oct 13 2009, 11:31 am In response to AmonR
Ninjafro	May we give critique on those giving critique on a person giving critique on your advice?

Oct 13 2009, 6:40 pm (Edited on Oct 13 2009, 6:46 pm)

Hulio-G

Ashton09 wrote:

please leave a remark and tell me if you think it still needs a little more touch ups.

Why is this so blurry? Maybe you should try a different hosting service such as imageshack.us. Anyway, Judging from the blur, the body is the only part of this that isn't flat. Look at the way you're using black (pants/blade), you're lacking a second color that could provide light.

http://www.byond.com/members/PixelArt/forum?id=5509&view=1 Look at the difference from his blade and yours, he uses a second color to apply dimension.

P.S. end your link tags with "" otherwise it'll make everyone reply in orange.

Oct 14 2009, 9:15 am In response to Ninjafro
Ashton09	Ninjafro wrote: May we give critique on those giving critique on a person giving critique on your advice? yes you can