Base WIP

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Jun 19 2010, 7:04 am (Edited on Jul 1 2010, 6:17 am)
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Jun 19 2010, 12:00 pm
It's a good start, but it's all pillowed. Find a light-source and shade from there.
Jun 19 2010, 4:21 pm
Don't worry about shading at the moment, first worry about a more eye-pleasing palette and a better overall structure of the little guy's form.

Kind of looks like a sickly Lego(c) man.
Jun 20 2010, 3:49 am
In response to Maximus_Alex2003


Edited it again.
Jun 20 2010, 4:04 am
In response to Howey
Howey wrote:


Edited it again.

Separate a little the arms?
Jun 20 2010, 4:11 am
In response to Etsukurenay
Etsukurenay wrote:
Howey wrote:


Edited it again.

Separate a little the arms?

Jun 20 2010, 4:22 am
In response to Howey


The arms out like that don't look right to me, so I changed it a bit, I also made him shoter as he was to tall. D:
Jun 20 2010, 4:24 am
In response to Howey
Jun 20 2010, 4:26 am
In response to Etsukurenay
Etsukurenay wrote:
maybe that can help you : http://ect.downstate.edu/courseware/haonline/gifs/title3.gif

No it doesn't, sorry. That image shows that the guy has put his arms like that (Tell by his hands mostly), they aren't relaxed arms in that image.

Jun 20 2010, 6:24 am
#5 is the best progress so far.
Mostly because you are letting the little guy have actual arms and not little twigs glued to the side of his body.
Some main focal points you should work on;
1) A more pink-ish palette. Right now, he looks very sickly.
2) Give him joints. He needs shoulders, elbows, knees etc.
3) Then you can worry about shading and major coloring, as well as some AA and/or dithering as well if you want to.
Jun 20 2010, 10:49 am
In response to Maximus_Alex2003


How do I make elbows, and knees. I think the shoulders look ok though, tips on how to improve them if they don't look right to you guys would be appreciated. D:
Jun 20 2010, 11:13 am
In response to Howey
Howey wrote:


How do I make elbows, and knees. I think the shoulders look ok though, tips on how to improve them if they don't look right to you guys would be appreciated. D:

Well, when I first saw your base I imagined this;



But it's been terribly too long since I've worked in anything under than 64x64, so I apologize if it's not a great edit.
Jun 22 2010, 1:15 pm


I've decided to go bigger, here's what I've done.
Jun 22 2010, 2:09 pm
In response to Howey



Another Edit.
Jun 22 2010, 2:18 pm
In response to Howey
Howey wrote:



Another Edit.
Put the chest more down =/ it seems like if he is uhm...extracting chest?
Jun 22 2010, 2:22 pm
In response to Etsukurenay


Better?
Jun 22 2010, 3:07 pm
In response to Howey
Howey wrote:


Better?

kinda, but separate it to the head =/ it looks like u got no neck =P

plus shade it down the chest(abs)

and uh... maybe make the pants more..look, the human body got a thing like V in the penis xD! so try to make the pants like that? so the perspective going to change aliek if u are lookin from the sky ? btw its better
Jun 22 2010, 4:55 pm
In response to Howey



vs.



(Do as you please with it. It's a very quick edit and I haven't even covered shading or proper AA. Also, the arms are a bit awkward. =\ )
Jun 22 2010, 5:08 pm
In response to Maximus_Alex2003
Maximus_Alex2003 wrote:



vs.



(Do as you please with it. It's a very quick edit and I haven't even covered shading or proper AA. Also, the arms are a bit awkward. =\ )


Its good for a very quick edit but i think the chest is wrong =/ so ill do an edit too
http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/7237/okiiu.png
Jun 22 2010, 5:14 pm
In response to Etsukurenay
Etsukurenay wrote:
Its good for a very quick edit but i think the chest is wrong =/ so ill do an edit too
http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/7237/okiiu.png

You can embed a pic by using the
Yeah, you got the arms better than me. I'm going to sleep, got class in 5 hours.


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