PS: here is a sceenshot of the Susanoo technique. i really need some critisim on it s can improve it,,so everything is welcome harsh or otherwise.
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 Apr 7 2010, 2:34 pm
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Well with all the hard work i put into the game. I am almost done with eough tuff to releae the game to the public. All that is left is a few minor codes maybe a little iconing and mapping. Also i need someone to host for me once te game is ready,,anybody who is willing to host please contact me on my pager.
PS: here is a sceenshot of the Susanoo technique. i really need some critisim on it s can improve it,,so everything is welcome harsh or otherwise. | |
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Apr 7 2010, 3:03 pm
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Jakb2k7
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looking nice i may be able to host for you ill have to portforward on a new laptop but good work
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Thanks,, and yeah that would be sweet if you could host,,ill add you on my pager and once the game is ready we'll talk more about it
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The HUD is ugly. Nothing really matches.
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Revelation Gaming wrote:
The HUD is ugly. Nothing really matches. Thanks, i agree with that, you have any tips on this? making it better i mean? | |
Your HUD is a complete mess.
I can't distinguish what is what. I'd advise to completely redo the HUD Graphics (Hell, all the graphics) since from looking at your screenshot, they terribly clash with each other. Looks like a visual Frankenstein's Monster game. Oh, and positioning could use some work as well. | |
Yeah you shouid redo the HUD the HP And Charka bar.
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hmmm, okay ill take al these things into account, thanks
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Hmm, ill tell you this much. Your Susanoo is not bad and is probably the best attempt at the technique ive seen yet (not saying much but hey, good job.). Also the health bar is not awful, you can probably keep it. The issue is the chakra bar is not very good, the icon is overly bevelled and has too many colors and simply doesnt look very good. The book on the right top corner is a fairly big eyesore too. The green triangle, i assume is stamina.. I dont care for it, or at very least its positioning.
The minimap is a nice touch, im glad to see you including something like that. Your wall turfs need work,you use shading in such a way (top to bottom lighting) that makes it not a good idea to stack them like that, your better off making two wall turfs a top half and bottom half if you want to make a 64 pixel high wall. Outside of that there isnt much else to look at, the base icon and the tiles on the ground are pretty good. Edit: Also if you want to get less critical responses in the future, you should spell check your hub posts. It seems completely irrelevant, but it sets you up for criticism when somebody has been irked by your excessive typos. I think you want a fair evaluation of your screenshot and your setting yourself up for a hostile atmosphere. | |
Thanks Masterdan, it honestly means a lot to me to have your advice. I've been working on some new ideas to make the hub look better. i'll put it up once i finish for more advice.
PS: my laptop acts kind of stupid sometimes when i type, but i agree on that subject also. | |
Sounds good, keep at 'er.
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You need to srsly improve.
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Jedioh wrote:
You need to srsly improve. anything in specific,,or everything? | |
Here's my two cents:
The HUD isn't really nice to look at it. personally i don't like the Diamond idea, but thats just me. i personally think that the bars itself are kinda thick and short. i say a HUD should be like a woman, Not too short, yet not too tall, Not a Toothpick, but Not a Whale, must have personality, mustbe able to dress itself nicely, and must be able to compliment others. So far i see nothing complimenting each other in the terms of the Health and Chakra Bars. if anything,i think you should Combine The bars in some way, and if you decide to keep the Diamond, anchor it at the bottom or the top, so as the bars are sitting on top of or under the Chakra and Health bars, seeming like the bars are anchored to the Diamond. And to make it better Lengthen and make skinny the bars a bit. one thing that always pet peeves me are midget HP bars. but i digress. I think a minimap will be good, if done correctly. i do not know how you have it set up, but i hope to see it work firsthand. And remember contact me on the pager i think i can host for you. | |
This is a old picture of the game. i redid the hub and everything like that. but thanks for the input
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