My Book now for Free in Off Topic

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Jan 9 2012, 7:56 am
I got many critiques and some tips for my book which I took in a right manner and decided to sell my book for free. Money doesn't matter to me at this current point but, what matters is if my plots and imagination is could enough to be accepted by the readers and, if I have potential to be an author and continue this writing work. I had hardly read any novel or story in my life but when I started to write my first sequel of story I began to read novellas and thought to improve English. Anyways, give a chance to my novella i.e. Fight of Elements: A Novella, which would not consume much of your precious time. If you read it, it would help me directly, even indirectly as your reviews and comments would let me know what I need to improve more. I have mentioned that I got comments mostly bad, but those were just based on sample and synopsis which are rather inconsistent.

Here is my book available for free awaiting readers from this great community.


Thanking You for spending your precious time reading this

Yours sincerely
Aastikya Tiwari
#1 Jan 9 2012, 9:23 am
You da man
#2 Jan 9 2012, 9:45 am
I think it might be easier to make a book in first person. I always had a easier time in school writing from my own point of view than with third person.
#3 Jan 9 2012, 11:59 am
Just to say, My dad is Indian 2 :P
#4 Jan 9 2012, 10:03 pm
WHERE THE FUCK ARE THE PICTURES!?!?!
#5 Jan 10 2012, 6:27 am
EmpirezTeam wrote:
I think it might be easier to make a book in first person. I always had a easier time in school writing from my own point of view than with third person.

It might be easier but for readers it may be difficult to read, in the stories authors like to depict story of other persons to inspire readers. If they star writing in first person readers would feel that things are happening with them and etc etc; kinda like drawbacks? I hope you understood what I meant to say.

Vegetas4 wrote:
Just to say, My dad is Indian 2 :P

That's Cool! Btw, how did you come to know I am an Indian? Did I mention it somewhere?


Ryuk25 wrote:
WHERE THE FUCK ARE THE PICTURES!?!?!

What picture are you talking about? Sorry, but I couldn't understand it.
#6 Jan 12 2012, 3:06 pm
A2J2TIWARI wrote:
Vegetas4 wrote:
Just to say, My dad is Indian 2 :P

That's Cool! Btw, how did you come to know I am an Indian? Did I mention it somewhere?

I knew this cause when I clicked on the author of the book (Which were you), I saw that you cam from India, I guess your muslim ?


#7 Jan 13 2012, 4:03 am
No, I am not a Muslim, I am Hindu, but that doesn't matter to me, lol.
#8 Jan 14 2012, 6:04 am
Anyways, Have you guys read my book and have reviews for it now?
#9 Jan 14 2012, 7:59 am
A2J2TIWARI wrote:
No, I am not a Muslim, I am Hindu, but that doesn't matter to me, lol.

well me 2
#10 Jan 14 2012, 8:08 am
I wish all the Hindus and Muslims think like that so India can develop faster.