The arm would bend more, instead of just tilting upwards.
And the left leg travels quite far back considering the right leg barely moves. Also, I don't quite think the body would move that much, it's a bit too far for a small little gun.
Otherwise, it's pretty decent. I think a little more shading and fixing the recoil will do nicely.
The arm would bend more, instead of just tilting upwards.
And the left leg travels quite far back considering the right leg barely moves. Also, I don't quite think the body would move that much, it's a bit too far for a small little gun.
Otherwise, it's pretty decent. I think a little more shading and fixing the recoil will do nicely.
On top of this the left leg just looks like it is being chopped in half vertically.
#9 May 14 2012, 10:57 pm (Edited on May 14 2012, 11:11 pm)
I actually moved the body only once pixel but since the sprite is so small(32*32) it's hard to manage everything; like the bending of elbows would make the hand look weird and even moving the body one pixel made the piece look weird. I agree to your point though, thanks for comment. I'll try once again to make elbow movement and recoil.
You've certainly improved. It's worth noting that comparing your most recent edit to the initial version, it's fantastic. I do hope you make use of this sprite.
I am glad to hear that people are starting to like my works. I remember what I was one year ago and what I am now. Thanks for feedback, but sadly this sprite isn't going to be used in any game but going on Pixel Joint.
One year ago, you were a highly motivated practicing pixel artist. This is just a result of that motivation and drive to learn. You should be proud of yourrself.
Don't get big-headed, though. Despite how good you are, there is always room for improvement. Keep it up!
One year ago, you were a highly motivated practicing pixel artist. This is just a result of that motivation and drive to learn. You should be proud of yourrself.
Don't get big-headed, though. Despite how good you are, there is always room for improvement. Keep it up!
I am still motivated, I wanna improve and be one of the best pixel artists on BYOND. And, nah, I am not going to be cocky. It's better to stick on ground than fly.
Might need to separate weapon from character, etc.