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WIP Clay Dragon, C+C needed.
Jan 14 2012, 6:02 pm
1) Great start
2) The shading, mainly on the wings, is a bit off. Instead of shading in the light as patches of radiance, try and smooth it completely out from lighter to darker colors (in this case white). The shading is way to sudden after the wings flap down; it should flow into it.
3) If you're going to add movement, add movement in the places where it would be appropriate. If the wings themselves move, then logically, the entire part of the wings must move as well. Maybe animating the wings to also flap slightly up would work to create a better effect.
4) The dragon should be gliding up and down so making the wings push it up a few pixels are so would also add to a greater effect.
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