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Hey everyone. This is my first 32 x 64 base attempt which I plan to use for my current project. I have two made. The first one is the original but it came out too large so I had to scale it down a bit. Any critique? Please don't hold back.

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Left one: Original
Right one: Scaled Down.

Something just doesn't look right about the scaled down one.. but I'm not sure how I can fix it.. I need it to be smaller and found the scaled one to be the perfect height.. just looks sorta.. odd.
His arm and hand is literally a stick. Why does he not have hands?
AbdelJN wrote:
Hey everyone. This is my first 32 x 64 base attempt which I plan to use for my current project. I have two made. The first one is the original but it came out too large so I had to scale it down a bit. Any critique? Please don't hold back.

Photobucket

Left one: Original
Right one: Scaled Down.

Something just doesn't look right about the scaled down one.. but I'm not sure how I can fix it.. I need it to be smaller and found the scaled one to be the perfect height.. just looks sorta.. odd.

I actually like the scaled down one more.
Could use a bit of a higher contrast or hue shift.

** only edited the small base **

I added some highlights to accentuate his good shaped body.
Added 1 darker shaded colour to frame his muscles a bit better.
and changed the lightsource from rihght to left because i hate right lightsources....

When making a base you need to think where light does and doesn't shine and work with that.
it's not only the head that the sun shines down on!


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another minor edit. just changed the colours a bit to make him look a bit more well toned!
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In response to Pandora'sSecret (#2)
Your arms are way to short
In response to Pandora'sSecret (#2)
Pandora'sSecret wrote:
AbdelJN wrote:
Hey everyone. This is my first 32 x 64 base attempt which I plan to use for my current project. I have two made. The first one is the original but it came out too large so I had to scale it down a bit. Any critique? Please don't hold back.

Photobucket

Left one: Original
Right one: Scaled Down.

Something just doesn't look right about the scaled down one.. but I'm not sure how I can fix it.. I need it to be smaller and found the scaled one to be the perfect height.. just looks sorta.. odd.

I actually like the scaled down one more.
Could use a bit of a higher contrast or hue shift.

** only edited the small base **

I added some highlights to accentuate his good shaped body.
Added 1 darker shaded colour to frame his muscles a bit better.
and changed the lightsource from rihght to left because i hate right lightsources....

When making a base you need to think where light does and doesn't shine and work with that.
it's not only the head that the sun shines down on!


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another minor edit. just changed the colours a bit to make him look a bit more well toned!
Image and video hosting by TinyPic

Oo I like your edit :D

EDIT: PS: This is AbdelJN just another acc
In response to Moonlight Memento (#1)
Moonlight Memento wrote:
His arm and hand is literally a stick. Why does he not have hands?

I was kinda giving it a bit of a simplistic feel but thanks(: im gonna try to give him some hands.

Abrax wrote:
Your arms are way to short

Yeahh they do look kinda short. I'mma make them a bit longer, thanks ( :

Anything else need work on?

EDIT: PS: This is AbdelJN just another acc
In response to DARK LLOYD (#5)
DARK LLOYD wrote:
Moonlight Memento wrote:
His arm and hand is literally a stick. Why does he not have hands?

I was kinda giving it a bit of a simplistic feel but thanks(: im gonna try to give him some hands.

Abrax wrote:
Your arms are way to short

Yeahh they do look kinda short. I'mma make them a bit longer, thanks ( :

Anything else need work on?

EDIT: PS: This is AbdelJN just another acc

Photobucket

Gave him hands and made the arms longer. Crit please.

Also this is meant to be Naruto styled.. anyone think it's too built for a Naruto game or is it fine?
In response to AbdelJN (#6)
AbdelJN wrote:
DARK LLOYD wrote:
Moonlight Memento wrote:
His arm and hand is literally a stick. Why does he not have hands?

I was kinda giving it a bit of a simplistic feel but thanks(: im gonna try to give him some hands.

Abrax wrote:
Your arms are way to short

Yeahh they do look kinda short. I'mma make them a bit longer, thanks ( :

Anything else need work on?

EDIT: PS: This is AbdelJN just another acc

Photobucket

Gave him hands and made the arms longer. Crit please.

Also this is meant to be Naruto styled.. anyone think it's too built for a Naruto game or is it fine?

Gave the base some hair, some clothes, some shoes, a headband and voila. Naruto: Photobucket

C+C?
In response to AbdelJN (#7)
All directions complete.. the side isn't looking very great IMO.. what do you guys think..?

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Edit: Updated sideview; Photobucket

Is this any good? Anything look bad about it? Please C+C
In response to AbdelJN (#8)
AbdelJN wrote:
All directions complete.. the side isn't looking very great IMO.. what do you guys think..?

Photobucket

Edit: Updated sideview; Photobucket

Is this any good? Anything look bad about it? Please C+C

Im wondering why it is AA'd to the white bg?
or blurred?

Is it on purpose or because of photobucket?

if on purpose, please get rid of it.
In response to Pandora'sSecret (#9)
Pandora'sSecret wrote:
AbdelJN wrote:
All directions complete.. the side isn't looking very great IMO.. what do you guys think..?

Photobucket

Edit: Updated sideview; Photobucket

Is this any good? Anything look bad about it? Please C+C

Im wondering why it is AA'd to the white bg?
or blurred?

Is it on purpose or because of photobucket?

if on purpose, please get rid of it.

it's photobucket. bseides that what do you think of it?