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Feb 9 2012, 6:19 pm
Making a Splash Screen to put in all our future games. This is what we have so far.
I feel like I need to add more additions to this. Any suggestions? Feedback is also welcome.
Feb 9 2012, 6:24 pm
It's great for a start. Far from complete, though.
I suggest shading it a bit, particularly around the eyes.
Also, the mouth and eyes need some AA.
Good start, though!
Feb 9 2012, 6:33 pm
Looks nice so far, but you definitely need to apply some anti aliasing, it would make this look much better.
Feb 9 2012, 7:29 pm
Added some AA to the mouth. How is it?
Feb 9 2012, 7:37 pm
Looks better. Although it seems a tiny bit too heavy.
Feb 10 2012, 12:11 am
You need AA on everything. I dig the monochrome. I dig the simplicity.
I think shading might screw up the look you're going for.
That said, it still feels like this is missing something.
Perhaps you should try adding your key name underneath it or below it.
Feb 10 2012, 7:09 am
Well added the name underneath it. I think its going for a pixely type of look.
Feb 10 2012, 7:23 am
O,o a title screen that looks like a blot thingy my therapist would use to see if I was crazy. I likes!
Feb 10 2012, 11:40 pm
I dig it.
Feb 11 2012, 8:30 am
Eyebrows are jaggy over eyes but good overall design.
Feb 11 2012, 9:14 am
far from perfect but i did this in like 5 minutes of boredom lol. not saying this is better, but personally i like the random change i did haha
Feb 11 2012, 10:03 am
I did a REALLY quick AA job to show you the potential of the piece.
Feb 11 2012, 10:38 am
In response to
Thanks! I'm not really good with AA, that is something that I would have to improve on in the future.
Feb 16 2012, 11:34 am
Yeah, really nice logotype. But as it's been already told, it needs AA. Good one :P
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