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Just seeing how I could make this look, this is first try, tips wanted.

Konoha Test
Chwgt wrote:
Just seeing how I could make this look, this is first try, tips wanted.

Konoha Test

-There's blades that look like fangs in your grass that stick out too much, keep the pattern you have and follow it through.
-People usually shade windows with thick diagonal highlights.
-The strings hanging from your Akatsuki hat are as thick as light bulbs, you cant outline thin strings when you pixel, what you do is leave strings 1 pixel thick.
-Also on the Akatsuki hat you over dithered (looks like 8 pixels thick) even if it was on purpose it's not the right texture. If you're going to dither let it be 1-2 pixel thick max.
-You can see the 32x32 square on the sandy floor.
-Good job with the coloring of the stones. Contrast came out nice. Woody door needs a dark color (maybe an outline, to make it have more life it look's too plain, the same goes for the red wall, which would look better if it was colored better.

Spacing out coloring.
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2723/ spaceoutcolorsau7.png