Zentrix: Map Reference Mockup in Art & Sound

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Apr 28 2012, 4:47 pm
Hello, I was looking for some feedback on a map reference for Zentrix! We've been making a lot of province with the design document over the past couple months and I spent the better part of the evening piecing together a map reference from memory of how Luari was designed in our old RPs. There is plenty of room to add and expand so please give feedback on names, clutter, or even suggest areas!



Note: Luari is divided into three provinces which are marked by different colors in the reference which are as follows;
Yellow - Ona Province
Orange - Onaki Province
Green - Hai Kun Province

I'll gladly answer questions related to the game and such here as well.

Thanks,
-Kumo
#1 Apr 28 2012, 4:50 pm
Needs moar hookers.

:D
#2 Apr 28 2012, 6:10 pm
Pretty nice map. A few names could use some work, though. I'd add a word to Crest Lakes name, something like Silver maybe. Silver Crest Lake flows a little better than Crest Lake. High Family Castle seems like a placeholder. Lots of things would be better. My mind probably just made up a word when it instantly thought of Hylore Family Castle.

Northern Forest and Mt.IceCycle are the last two iffy names, in my opinion. I'd suggest something like Shadow Wood Forest, and Mt.Frostbite for those. With names out of the way, the only real feedback I can provide is that Hai Kun seems a been lacking in forests.

This could be a personal thing, but since it is represented by green and has the two lakes I would expect it to have the most greenery/forests; if not at least a large forest near/around the largest lake.
#3 Apr 28 2012, 8:08 pm
Silver Crest Lake and Mt. Frostbite sound pretty good! Would you mind if I steal them? Haha! The Northern Forest will likely stay named as such because of the fact that the RP had three forest(Northern, Western and Eastern Forests) and having cut the other three, I wanted to keep some homage there.

Hai Kun is mostly marshland and fields but now that I think of it, you raise a pretty valid point! I'll work in some more forests!
#4 Apr 28 2012, 9:09 pm
In response to Kumorii (#3)
Be my guest! I came up with them simply for this, so they are welcome within it. I can definitely understand how you feel about the Northern Forest, so that is no problem.

Ah, marshland and fields. I see. That makes a bit more sense, but I'm still glad to hear that you'll be working on that.
#5 Apr 29 2012, 5:39 am
I will chill with the High family that sounds pretty dope
to me