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My first attempt of creating an icon outside of Dream Maker. Tell me your opinions and critism.
Phantasy55 wrote:
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/143/nirvash.png/
My first attempt of creating an icon outside of Dream Maker. Tell me your opinions and critism.

The stance is quite odd, as for the shading it's quite messy, but nevertheless it looks nice.
It's hard to tell what it's supposed to be. I know it's some sort of robot, but it took me a while to figure out where everything was. The arms are too long and the head is too small. At first glance, especially at the top, it just looks like a bunch of jumbled pixels, but when I looked at it a bit longer, I'm like "Oh, that's a head." Work on making your art more distinguishable rather than just a dull figure.
Real iconers use paint lol... I kid.
its good for a starter, this should be a character in Gundam right?

things to be fixed are:

. Shading (make it a little be darker)
. Arms.
. Stance.
. Head should be bigger.

good luck
In response to Sers000 (#4)
Actually. I'm pretty sure this is Gallantmon from Digimon Season 3/various Digimon games. It's pretty nice, but as others have noted it's too hard to tell who it is and some of the sizing is off.
Good job reviving an old thread.
In response to ImmeasurableHate (#6)
Hah, I didn't even notice that. Good catch. Maybe the last post time needs to be easier to notice, or, ya know... People could stop the extremely late and unnecessary replies <.<