Dragon Ball Base W.I.P. in Art & Sound

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Feb 7 2009, 7:47 am
Here's the recent base I've been working on, I think I've improved from all the other bases , I've made shading and shape wise.



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#1 Feb 12 2009, 7:27 pm (Edited on Feb 12 2009, 7:34 pm)
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a really fast edit

i fix the legs cause yours look discombobulate and arms

i also made the chest pop up more added some more details.
#2 Feb 12 2009, 11:43 pm
In response to John liriano (#1)
Nice.
#3 Feb 13 2009, 3:21 am
In response to John liriano (#1)
John liriano wrote:
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a really fast edit

i fix the legs cause yours look discombobulate and arms

i also made the chest pop up more added some more details.

Heh, thanks John your edits good as usual, any more critique people?
#4 Feb 13 2009, 1:48 pm
In response to Rasengan3oo4 (#3)
Hmmm, there is a big perspective issue here. Your using 3/4ths right? If so, the feet are the only thing that are in 3/4ths, the rest of it is in a side scroller view(Which makes him look like he is on his tippy toes). Look in Tutorials for the 3/4ths perspective topic AmonR made.
#5 Feb 13 2009, 9:15 pm
In response to Dark Inc. (#2)
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.
#6 Feb 14 2009, 12:01 am
In response to Riku 123q (#5)
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

So? and ur telling me that?
Plox do me a favor dun talk to me and go check ur uber nub ranking http://www.byond.com/members/ChrisGayle Honorary Noob List!
#7 Feb 14 2009, 12:04 am
In response to Dark Inc. (#6)
Dark Inc. wrote:
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

So? and ur telling me that?
Plox do me a favor dun talk to me and go check ur uber nub ranking http://www.byond.com/members/ChrisGayle Honorary Noob List!

You think I care what chrisgayle or anyone on the internet thinks of me?
Anyway that was directed to Ras I accidentally quoted you.
Now do me a favor and learn to spell at least partially right.
KTHXBAI!
#8 Feb 14 2009, 2:08 am
In response to Riku 123q (#7)
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Riku 123q wrote:
Dark Inc. wrote:
Nice.

Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

So? and ur telling me that?
Plox do me a favor dun talk to me and go check ur uber nub ranking http://www.byond.com/members/ChrisGayle Honorary Noob List!

You think I care what chrisgayle or anyone on the internet thinks of me?
Anyway that was directed to Ras I accidentally quoted you.
Now do me a favor and learn to spell at least partially right.
KTHXBAI!

Take these arguments off of these forums.
#9 Feb 14 2009, 8:24 am
In response to Riku 123q (#5)
Riku 123q wrote:
Rules Say to critque art.
Really your legs are too skinny they just don't look right with his upper body.

Its 32x32 icon sizes what do you expect. If I changed the legs I would have to change the whole icon itself also.
#10 Feb 14 2009, 8:41 pm
It looks good.

:)
#11 Feb 15 2009, 5:37 am
In response to Rugg (#10)
Rugg wrote:
It looks good.

:)
Thanks I'm going to post updated version a bit later which might feature new color choice, I got critique Pmitch over msn. :O