Part 2 of Divine Mirrors! Read the bottom post if you want to catch up with where we are. I've just finished checking this part over and added a little more to it. So here, enjoy!

Part 2 – One With Time

The waiter walked towards another man in the café, “I’m sure by now you’ve seen them. If we can hand them over to Lucifer, we’ll be greatly awarded in the other world. Don’t you agree, Kairen?” Kairen turned his head towards his comrade Syasu, and then focused towards where Traiken and Katan were talking. Kairen was an Aryan while in human form. He was currently wearing a unique style of clothing consisting of a blood red long coat, a devilish black shirt and a rare pair of trousers – pale grey with graffiti all over.

“It seems so perfect…although we can’t afford to underestimate them at all. Traiken is said to be a son of both Time and Magic. That is a combination to be truly feared. Katan’s also a former slave of Lucifer himself and spent 2 years fighting by his side. I guess we can give it a try – if all fails; we’ll report this to Lucifer. Otherwise, we can kill those bastards now.” Kairen stood up and walked towards the table where Katan and Traiken were located at, followed by Syasu. Each of them held concealed daggers within their hands.

“Traiken, if what you say is true, then now would be a perfect chance to investigate deeper into Lucifer’s sourc… – shit! Traiken, it seems we’re not alone in this discussion anymore.” Katan turned his attention to the strangers advancing towards them nearby, “Would you like to join us outside, you two?” Kairen asked. Both Traiken and Katan moved outside without mentioning a word between the two.

Syasu began to speak as they stepped outside, a dagger in her left hand, “Come with us, both of you. Come with us through the portal to the other world and surrender yourselves to Lucifer…or feel our wraith.” “Shit! I left everything except my dagger in my cost at home…damn, this is bad!” Traiken thought to himself. He looked at Katan and nodded. Katan returned the nod, both of them withdrawing their daggers for battle. “Seems we have no choice, eh Katan?” “Seems not Traiken, these guys won’t leave us so easily.”

After once again exchanging nods, Traiken and Katan began to run to the outer parts of the cities, followed directly by Syasu and Kairen. “Get back here, bastards!” Kairen shouted viciously as the surroundings began changing, observers watching in fear as the weapons held in their hands clearly flashed into their eyes. As they reached a park nearby, Traiken and Katan stopped, a red glow infusing itself into Traiken’s dagger. Traiken gave Katan a signal, “Let’s do this, Katan.” Katan returned the signal and motioned his body around. As the other 2 stopped behind them both, Traiken spun round, unleashing a slash of fire from his burning dagger straight towards Syasu and Kairen, followed by Katan.

The fire slash scratched it’s way across the ground – missing Syasu and Kairen, giving Syasu the opportunity to drive straight towards Traiken, not realising Katan’s movement towards Kairen. As their blades hit sparks fly in every direction, it became clear there was a deadly power struggle between both Katan and Kairen. As time passed and the dust settled, Kairen’s high class dagger dressed in red blood stains could visibly be seen to overpower Katan, sparking excitement in his face. “It’s been a while since I’ve faced such an opponent, it seems you give me no chance but to finish this quickly and mercilessly.” As Katan finished, his rusty dagger began to burn with a dark power, forcing a growing black aura to absorb the light surrounding his blade. All Kairen could do was stare in confusion and horror as he began to fall into the depths of the black aura.

“I didn’t come prepared for a fight…I’ll have to do it with one hit of this dagger!” Traiken thought to himself as he watched Syasu’s movement. As she got near, a magical glow began to morph itself into the newly unsheathed sword on her right hand as her dagger suddenly dissipated into the air. Almost as if by chance, the clouds seemed to open, a deadly lightning bolt striking it’s way straight through the air into the blade held by Syasu, infusing itself within it – declaring it’s fatality. “You’ll feel pain for not respecting Lucifer!” At an incredible rate, her speed began to increase tenfold; there was no way for Traiken to avoid the attack. She held up her enormous sword and slashed it straight through Traiken with unbelievable power... Traiken found himself screaming in a pool of blood, darkness closing in on him.

Yo, just thought I'd share a story I write in my spare time/when I'm bored lol it's called "Divine Mirrors". Enjoy the first part:

Part 1 - Destined To Fight

Light imbursted itself through the dark clouds as day arose. Traiken was outside, looking deeply into the sky on the damp bench. It seemed as though a memory was running through his mind, one that had been taunting him for a while. "With your father's strength and your mother's courage, only you, Traiken, can defeat him. With the power of Time and with the power of Magic, only you can rid all worlds of the horror! It's your destiny."

He sighed, picking himself up. His denim jeans, black Nike top and black leather coat swaying heavily in the cool, breezy air. He had been up for 2 hours and it was currently 7am. His clothes were soaked from the rain. He felt cold. The same feeling his had ever since he was a baby. He walked slowly to his house, rain dropping from his spiky black hair. As he entered, he headed straight for his room and changed his clothes. He had a scheduled meeting with Katan soon and knew it would be risky for him to miss it. It was risky to miss anything.

He took a taxi to the appointed meeting location, a small cafe quite far away from his house. As he entered, he looked suspiciously in all directions incase Lucifer had decided to track him again. Lucifer never gave up. It didn't take him long to find Katan, sat in the back of the cafe with more of his casual clothes on. He had an expensive red top on with black trousers. He had his usual Lonsdale sweatshirt on.

Traiken sighed as he approached Katan, "You sure do overdo it. Does everything you have in your closet have a huge price tag? You'd think someone with your personality wouldn't bother with such style of clothing." Katan was asian with black hair containing tips of red at the top and dark green eyes. Girls were often attracted to him but he seemed to ignore their glances. He didn't seem to care about emotions anymore. He'd felt too much hurt from his past. Even with all this, Katan was able to charm anyone with his incredible sense of humour and ability to enjoy himself at times.

"That's coming from you? Those clothes look expensive...and new. Besides, I have you in my closet. You're not expensive at all." Katan let out a childish chuckle while pointing towards Traiken's red top and stylish black trousers. Traiken had also put on a black McKenzie sweatshirt. "These were bargains! I ordered them off the net." Traiken's face changed it’s expression, a serious look emerging. "I've checked the area. It's been 4 months since our last meeting with him. I think his finally got off us, especially if he hasn't sent anyone to check up on us so far." Traiken said while someone came over to ask for their order.

"What would you like to have gents?” the waiter asked. She was holding a paper and pen in her hands, white t-shirt complimented by the blue tie and a long skirt. Something in her eyes alerted Traiken, he ignored it. "I'll have a cup of tea with a breakfast fry up." Traiken replied with a smile. "Same here, darling." Katan added. "Ok then, I'll be back with the soon with the food." The waiter began to walk off, taking one glance back at Katan and Traiken. Her eyes flashed red momentarily; it seemed to be such a lucky meeting...

Thanks for ready, if you want the other parts to be posted just ask in comments. C&C is welcome.

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