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Came home from work a few hours ago and was playing around with creating a new character.this is the outcome. playing around with dynamic and multiple light sources here. I named him "Galeo" he's using the fire technique to the left of this page,at least its weaker state.

Still a WIP. C&C is welcomed

17 colors excluding the background.
Looks awesome, can't wait to see how it looks finished!
Lmao, he looks like my visual communications teacher from 11th grade. Except he didn't have fire shooting out his back.
You want constructive and criticism?
sometimes when i'm lonely i draw him
Looks terribly choppy


Ryuk25 wrote:
You want constructive and criticism?

Comments and Criticism fewl.
i like it...u people trying to diss this can go kill yourselves
BetaMan12 wrote:
i like it...u people trying to diss this can go kill yourselves

referring to that enzu person
The redness behind him kind of makes it look weird, like a phoenix-centaur combo. But like you said, it's a WIP. It does look artistic even with multiple art source and I'd love to see this with the other leg done and the flames fleshed out.

+yea'd so far!
BetaMan12 wrote:
BetaMan12 wrote:
i like it...u people trying to diss this can go kill yourselves

referring to that enzu person

So doing exactly what the OP ask which is comment and criticize automatically makes my last option suicide right? No, you are a legit moron. IN THE LIVING FLESH! I have never seen one up close before.


It looks choppy and badly shaded at spots on the actual person. Not bothering with the flames because they looked rushed.
Chill out Enzui, the fact that someone points you out just draws attention to themselves.

@ Beta: Enzui's comment does "seem" to imply insult, but it is a straight to the point critique without any flowers or puff. Though he wasn't descriptive to which part was choppy so it's not to constructive.

I don't see exactly where it's choppy. (Not an art guru) So pointing it out would help both Zane and other viewers.
I am chill o__o. I don't get mad at people online. Waste of time and NRG.

Anyway this should clear things up.

The green circles represent where I find it choppy and rough. Some AA should smooth it out. The blue circle represents where I find shading inconsistant. Like, his back is in flames(a light source) but the spot RIGHT next to the flame is still dark as can be.
Im also confused as to the choppiness he speaks of. The flat red is not final.in fact its simply a place holder shaded bold red as it separate it visually from the rest of the sprite. its meant to be a sash/cape of sorts.
I posted exactly what I was referring to. And I also said I'm not focusing on the red or fire because it looks rushed and unfinished. Click the link and you will see.
He looks like a fusion between Rick James and Infernape. It doesn't get any more awesome than that.

Therefore, Enzui's complaints are invalid.
EmpirezTeam wrote:
He looks like a fusion between Rick James and Infernape. It doesn't get any more awesome than that...

LOL
Truseeker wrote:
EmpirezTeam wrote:
He looks like a fusion between Rick James and Infernape. It doesn't get any more awesome than that...

LOL

Is there any particular reason why you added two more periods to my sentence? I believe my original comment only had one.
I'm trying to slowly add more to peoples quotes so I can edit a whole quote without them thinking twice about it. (Jedi Mind Trickish)

That and I was trying to let them know there was more to what you said. I didn't feel like doing this: >... so I added more to your quote. *wink*
It costs cash to modify my sentences. I accept all methods of payment except back rubs. Only exquisite women of Latin descent are allowed to give me back rubs.
That fire is too yellow. I understand it's still wip, but adding some of the red/brown from pants would help.
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