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one of my latest peices,i think one of my best bases made so far :D
anyways here it is
[IMG]http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/Zane444/ newbase.png[/IMG]
C&C please
No offence but it looks like a human in the shape of a bowling pin, or a street cone lol, Try putting the legs 1 or 2 pixel closer, bring out the shoulders by 1 pixel and make the chest come out, his upper torso should be bigger than his lower, unless hes fat XD
In response to BxS0ldi3R (#1)
okay heres the updated version with leg brought in abit and some other fixes
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In response to Zane444 (#2)
His manboobs are a bit too low lol, Higher them a bit and make some abs =D
In response to Zane444 (#2)
Zane444 wrote:
okay heres the updated version with leg brought in abit and some other fixes
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In response to Rasengan3oo4 (#4)
Rasengan3oo4 wrote:
Zane444 wrote:
okay heres the updated version with leg brought in abit and some other fixes
Photobucket C&C please

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In response to Firekid (#5)
Firekid wrote:
Rasengan3oo4 wrote:
Zane444 wrote:
okay heres the updated version with leg brought in abit and some other fixes
Photobucket C&C please

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You stretched it?
In response to Rasengan3oo4 (#4)
sorry the late reply, i was at school anyways here it is
<img src="http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/Zane444/ newbasev15-2.png" border="0" alt="Photobucket">
keep the crits comin'! xD
In response to Rasengan3oo4 (#6)
Rasengan3oo4 wrote:
Firekid wrote:
Rasengan3oo4 wrote:
Zane444 wrote:
okay heres the updated version with leg brought in abit and some other fixes
Photobucket C&C please

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You stretched it?
yesh lolz nah i just gave it ears..=l
In response to Zane444 (#7)
Zane444 wrote:
sorry the late reply, i was at school anyways here it is
Photobucket fixed chest,added alittle abs :p
keep the crits comin'! xD

Do you bother reading reply's we fixed it and give it ear's...
In response to Firekid (#9)
i did give it ears i must of uploaded the wrong picture.look at it again i edited the picture
In response to Zane444 (#7)
It's a decent base, but I don't think it really fits Naruto's style.

You've made the body rather muscular but you should take into account the fact that most shinobi from Naruto weren't that built. That'd fit a Dragon Ball Z character alot more than it would someone from Naruto. I don't think you should have his frame so wide.

I made some edits to it.

For starters, it was a bit too tall. For a 32x32 base, having the height you have on it would make overlays difficult. And, as I said, the base was too muscular and bulky to be a Naruto character.

One last thing. I'd suggest you clean up your base. You have alot of unnecessary colors there. I didn't want to bother cleaning it up, but yeah. When there are two or more different colors that look almost exactly alike when placed next to each other, all but one are unnecessary because it won't make any difference when it comes to shading.



*Edit*
Also, if you're going to add a light-source to the head, don't disregard the rest of the body. Sunlight hits the whole body, not just the head.
In response to The dark prince majin vegeta (#11)
okay ill post updated base once im done, thanks for the crits man!
In response to Zane444 (#12)
You are currently using ALOT of colours for a simple 32x32, Remember all, You should limit yourself with your pallet... I redid the body and went kind of off Dark's shape edit.
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Zane444 wrote:
one of my latest peices,i think one of my best bases made so far :D
anyways here it is
[IMG]http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu26/Zane444/ newbase.png[/IMG]
C&C please

(You don't know how to link the art without having us click it?)
I like this first one, although it could use some touch-ups; atleast it's original and different from all those generic bases out there. But like dpmv said "Would it still feel like Naruto...?"
In response to Chris-g1 (#13)
Plain black is baaaaaaaad! Its the flattest color there is, use a very satured dark gray/purple.
In response to Bakasensei (#15)
Bakasensei wrote:
Plain black is baaaaaaaad! Its the flattest color there is, use a very satured dark gray/purple.

I didnt shade the black areas, thats why they are black.
In response to Chris-g1 (#16)
sorry uploaded the wrong base again. heres version 2

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