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ID:258944 Oct 6 2010, 5:15 pm
Jordan11	So out of boredom, I started working on a avatar for myself, and the game I've been working on. Need some CC on it and ways on how to improve it. (Already had help from a buddy, mainly on the rinnegan) But I'd like some comments from other people. Reference Note: The avatar is not up for grabs.

Oct 7 2010, 11:34 am
Jordan11	Bump.

Oct 7 2010, 3:00 pm (Edited on Oct 7 2010, 3:10 pm) In response to Jordan11
Maximus_Alex2003	Jordan11 wrote: Bump. Same-Day bump? A little impatient, I see. The only comment I have on it is really just use more shades. Don't be afraid like 90% of the artists on BYOND, and use more shades/colors for your palette. The cheek area specifically needs a lighter shade to compliment on the perspective and light-source. The shadowing needs one more shade.

Oct 7 2010, 4:45 pm

Vermolius

Here, I did an edit of it to show you how much AA can help you out. You show some signs of it throughout but aren't applying it well enough I think. I also did a little work on random things just for fun. Compare the top Narutard (my edit) to the bottom Narutard (your original). I think the image is a bit cleaner and spiffier in mine. Overall it looks pretty good, press on with it. Oh, and Heather says she likes it for what that is worth, but she has a problem with any deviation from the show, so she mentioned that his eyes were blue or something.. I wouldn't know I haven't watched much of the show.

[edit] Forgot to add the image XD.

Oct 7 2010, 11:08 pm In response to Vermolius
Jordan11	Thanks for the edit, I will look into it. And as for the eyes, he's supposed to be in his demon form, lol. Hence the angry face/red eyes.

Oct 8 2010, 5:05 am

In response to Vermolius

Etsukurenay

Vermolius wrote:

Here, I did an edit of it to show you how much AA can help you out. You show some signs of it throughout but aren't applying it well enough I think. I also did a little work on random things just for fun. Compare the top Narutard (my edit) to the bottom Narutard (your original). I think the image is a bit cleaner and spiffier in mine. Overall it looks pretty good, press on with it. Oh, and Heather says she likes it for what that is worth, but she has a problem with any deviation from the show, so she mentioned that his eyes were blue or something.. I wouldn't know I haven't watched much of the show.

[edit] Forgot to add the image XD.

It is.....AWESOME XD!nice work