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 Jun 28 2007, 9:10 am (Edited on Jun 28 2007, 12:57 pm)
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This is a naruto Kage house it was on my naruto game i stop working on its the kage mansion adn the base icon i made the rest are sprites from GBA games so nvm those well hope you enjoy the picture this is my msn [email protected] if you wanna contact me for any coments or just post them here
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There is some inconsistency in the lineart. At the top, the little platform is somewhat curved. A little lower, the two roofs are a bit less curved, and the bottom theer's almost no curving at all. I can't think of a single prespective that would make it look like that. And yeah, like Smiker said, get rid of the gradients and actually shade it. There are quite a few tutorials on how to do this on these forums.
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I like the Shading with lines since its such a big picture if i use shading it woulnt give that shiny look that is has
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Nidaime Hokage wrote:
I like the Shading with lines since its such a big picture if i use shading it woulnt give that shiny look that is has Sure it would. You're making excuses. The gradient works alright for the bottom two floors, but it breaks the picture for the top floor. It's at a different angle than the other two. You've also got perspective issues with the shape of the top floor (the oval that makes its base isn't at the right angle). Otherwise, its a good start on a good design. Add some detail and give the shading another try. | |
also, it would be fine that you make some antialiasing.
well, lineart is cool :)